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Thanks Clau, for a thoughtful comment despite your inclination to more rhyme-centric poetry. ^_^ I loved the use of days and grays. (unless you are speaking of a The Greys, ...

Hey Smaur. I've read this, ah well - more than once. I thought at last I ought to say something. What caught my attention most - and in the most ...

"And you're going to survive this?" remarked Dashevsky. There was a pause. Disoriented, Tov shook his head, gaze flicking from white walls, windowless and back to the questioner's face. "Er, ...

[...] Bradbury, a lot of the classic authors, but I also like new authors like Margret Weis and Tracy Hickman who wrote the Dragon Lance Trilogy. ...Well, one must like ...

Oy, thanks Myth! If I've got two Myth-critiques in a day, I'm sure it makes it a good one. ^_^ I don’t think ‘the’ is necessary there. I know this ...

Myth - thanks so much; really - you're divinely helpful. ^_^ ...And with this critique (and the others I've gotten) I've got to stop delaying my rewrite/revision. !_! You often ...

White space sans the 'white' bit. ^_~ The themes are always amusing - whichever ones: Valentines or otherwise. I picked 'other'.

Hey Andy! Welcome and all that, to YWS. ^_^ You've covered, more or less, all that any self-respecting greeter here might ask - and I notice you've already commented on ...

I could be honest. Hey - serious, too, right? I could. But who could tell? -Tov Yes. -Piers More than one - but not really lost; only it feels like ...

Schedule time to relax? Ha - like scheduling the time to jump off a bridge, right? Not that I've ever done either. -Tov If you could schedule a bloody time ...

Hullo Jig. ^_^ Being a Duel entry, naturally, I'll have to get to a relatively useful critique at some point. At the moment, brevity. I enjoyed the atmosphere; and the ...

If the Bible states that God is to love all his children whether they're sinners or not, and since nearly everybody is a sinner some time in their life, homosexuals ...

Thanks Wiggy - sharp suggestion on the rhythm...'and' and 'voice's' - you've got a point. ^_^ What does sans mean? I've never heard that word before! Sans - the French ...

You can't go wrong, starting at the top - either you hit your mark and make it big, so to speak, or you get the experience. ^_^ Good luck, Tri. ...

Hi my name is David and im new too! Hullo David. ^_^ You have an inarguably amusing avatar. ^_~ It's hilarious. Welcome to YWS then! With a good sense of ...